Ignore grammar and spelling. that’s the beginning of my story, it’s placed in the 19th century England. It’s kinda twisted but I hope you like it, just tell me what you think. If you want to know more or read more about the story, email me. ![]()
The hot sun beaded down on my face, the overpowering smell of cherries stirred up my stomach, but it didn’t matter. Out here was the only place women in heat and greedy men didn’t hound me. I needed time to think about why in was here. I have to focus, I can’t waste time on wine and parties.
“well well well, lord Claude has found his way to my secret hide away”. I should have known the queen of hearts herself would find me.
“Victoria, you look as fine as ever. Thank you for welcoming me into your home. I am honored to be a guest at your return party”. I didn’t feel honored at all or welcomed.
Victoria sat next to me. “You seemed uninterested in my return parties. Quite a shame, I worked so hard studying abroad”. Victoria looked me in the eyes, they seemed lively and wild but the burned a hole threw me.” If you aren’t here to enjoy yourself, then why are you here? Perhaps you are looking for a different kind of entertainment”.
I couldn’t take her any more, she’s too naïve, too young. “Victoria, that entertainment is not what I want from you. Besides I am not going to betray my fiancee so quickly”.
” oh lord Claude you tease me”. I couldn’t handle her any more, as politely as I could, I stood up and started walking. Victoria huffed “your a sick sick man Claude, playing with young girls hearts and leaving them. Your hardly a man. Taking in that useless sister of yours. She isn’t worth her salt, we all know she is your half sister”. Her venom made me stop. “Not lonely that but an Earl who serves the queen to solve horrific murders. It’s terrfiying to think you habent gone mad, and frankly how you understand and solve them is unnatural.”
Sick, am I? I turned back to Victoria and her wrist. “your right, it is horrifying to think I having gone mad. But you see, death is so beautiful, like when a child is born. No one knows whe that child has been and no one knows where it will go when it dies. What is beyond us is a mystery. Some leave in peace, some in pieces. Almost like what that masked killer is doing to his victims. Doesnt it frighten you, he could be near.”
Victoria start to breath heavy. I knew she was scared, which was good. I didn’t want anyone, especially not someone as loud and easy to fool like Victoria, to run around and become another victim.
“your horrible, and your mother was right to kill herself. A child like you is no dream of women. Look at yourself, seventeen and already heartless and cold. You will die alone.”
You will die alone, those word stung and made my scars come alive. I gave up, no amount of word can equal that. “good bye Victoria, I will see you very soon.” I left her there, that was all I could do.
You will die alone. Those toxic word filled me up. There was no way around it, I was going to die alone. I won’t, I can’t, take anyone down my path. Not my princess nor my bride will suffer like I have.
The story is mainly about the mythical Lilith from Judeo-Christian mythology.
In my story, Lilith started out as good, smart, independent strong woman who was ticked off from Adam and then was seduced by a demon to be his bride and queen. For years as queen, she stood up for herself and fought her own battles, but missed Adam; she both hated him for his arrogance and loved him because they were created together. But when she saw him with Eve, she was both jealous and heartbroken; She visited Adam in secret and told him that she missed him, Adam himself admitted that he still loves Lilith but Eve became more to him than just a replacement, Adam was actually in love with Eve. This has made Lilith bitterly jealous and started to hate all humans, mostly human women. She did and does feel pity for human women, but she still believes them to be lesser-than-woman because their mother Eve was made from Adam’s rib and therefore not ‘real’ humans like she believes herself to be. However, Lilith felt connected to Eve because they were both women, she wanted Eve to escape from Adam for fear that she might get hurt, even disguised herself as the serpent, but Eve could not leave Adam fr she loved him more than life itself. The pure love between Adam and Eve made Lilith bitterly jealous which slowly turned to stubborn pride, anger and spite, even paranoia; she believed feared that her youngest but most powerful daughter might steal her place as queen.
Here in my story I wanted to explain why Lilith is so cruel but she’s not a one-dimensional character, she was a human being who gave up her humanity but not her human flaws and weaknesses. She both hated and loved Adam, sympathetic and jealous Eve, but she will never forgive them or their children. In her mind, they stole everything from her.
okay so im writing a story about a super hero named kenny helms who is the Oxman, but i need a cool idea for a love triangle. cause theres two love interest, he does choice one but the one he was originally inlove with got frozen and memory erased and her memory isnt restored tilll his wedding with the other one. i just need a good idea how to interprit the love triangle. see the one love interest that gets frozen her name is luluby and she loves his hero side cause shes one of his villians, well they both are. the other is a acrobat like girl kinda like harley quinn and catwoman, see luluby and the acrobat girl both know him in real life but dont know hes oxman, luluby pays no mind to his human self. but kenny and the acrobats true identitys like each other. but hes in love with luluby but he eventually marrys the acrobat girl. i just need a good idea how to really drag on this love triangle and how to interprit it better. hopefully no ones confused by this lol. a good example is batman, catwoman and talia. batman loves talia but has a on and off with catwoman.
The Story (continued)……?
Tagged Under : continued......, story
The story has been mentioned in earlier posts. The real day to day events are given at the bottom below. It is complicated and now i need ur views.
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..
‘’she is my friend who shares everything with me. She has a best friend (guy) for over 4 years. They had been the thick of friends. Everyone hinted they may have more than something. She denied it and kept it as only friends (she was totally truthful about it).
..
..
..
Friendship flourished. They were in fones, internet, meeting. Discussing every little detail about their lives- from their crushes to movies, songs to all wicked stuff they did and eveything. in short, they trusted themselves which only can exist between soulmates (i am serious!!).
..
..
Then, she started to get marriage proposals. I heard the boy was a bit sad. he thought he wud lose his best friend forever So, BOOM, he proposed her. She was shocked. She scolded him that he had been friends with her only to gain romantic favour? Boy pleaded. He said he didnt want to lose her, so he said. But she was very angry and didnt listen to him.
.
.
,
3 months passed. They didnt talk. in between many marriage proposals came. She rejected them finding some fault or the other. Her mom got fed up of all this. Then one HUGE marriage proposal came. Boy was too rich. And her mom told her that this time, this will be the final. Coz the boy was exactly as she had defined in her choice. So, in 1 months time, the date for the marriage was fixed.
.
.
Now, here starts the filmy part.
.
.
.
Boy came to know of this. He immediatley congratulated her. And ask if she still was friends with him. She was still angry with him. She didnt reply. Then after 5 days of continous sms’es by him, she talkd to him that she has forgiven him and decided to remain as friends as always.
.
.
Friendship seemed to return. BUT, the boy AGAIN told her he still loved her and that was impossible for him to believe she will be gone from his life. If she loved him, she had to accept him but if she didnt, she was told to end the friendship. She pleaded to remain as frens, but boy was adamant end it or accept it. So, no choice, she had to end the friendship.
.
.
,
Another twist, boy after 3 days tells her sorry to behave that way. He wants to continue as friends, but he needs time 2 forget his feelings of love for her. When he feels there isnt any feelings, he wud return to her safely as a friend. She tells NO.(i thought good, thats how to deal with a dumb fellow). Boy pleaded that if he continues frenship, he would still keep on loving her and that wud create problems for her married life. She wudnt hear anything from him. (Serves him right, i thought)
.
.
Now here is the part which is beyond my understanding.
7 days before marriage, girl sends him a facebook marriage invitation. Boy is confused. He asks her whats this- u had stoppd being friends and now she sends him this. Also, he said he would not be able to attend her wedding coz he still loves her. he texts her, she doesnt reply. In 3 days time, he was given the actual marriage printed card to him which drove him wild again. Same questions from him, same did she react- no answers, and samely confused was the boy..
.
,
.
2 days b4 marriage, he called her. Finally she recieved. She told she had accepted him as a friend and friendship would AGAIN return as normal. But she said she would not give him the time he wants. She ended the call.
.
.
Thats how she got married to the groom arranged by her family.”
.
.
i have been on my friend’s (her)side always. She never loved him. Always told him to remain as friends. Boy loved her. And wanted her at any cost.
.
.
BUT,
.
.
The events in the last few days before her marriage shook me. This tells me it is also HER who is in love as well. Maybe she didnt realise it till the final days that it was HIM whom she always wanted in her subconscious. And so, she behaved in that manner. she didnt gave him time to forget his feelings. And that too, just before her marriage, is the real sign of real love.
.
.
.
UPDATES—-
After 1 month of her marriage, the boy feels he has moved on (honestly, he is happy for her and is jumping with life). He thinks its time to get back to her old friend.
He texts, ” hey. How are you?”.
But.
Now the girl avoids him. Doesnt reply. Avoids him online in facebook.
Now that was not the part of the story. It was her who was not willing to give him the time, she was wanting not to loose her friend and now she doesnt respond to him..
.
.
Its easy for guy to move on, he surely will, than to be friend with one such confused soul. But the question is why avoid him now?
The Story (continued)…….help..?
Tagged Under : continued.......help.., story
The story has been mentioned in earlier posts. The real day to day events are given at the bottom below. It is complicated coz WOmen seem more complicated and confused (plz dont mind for saying this) and so, i need ur views.
..
..
‘’she is my friend who shares everything with me. She has a best friend (guy) for over 4 years. They had been the thick of friends. Everyone hinted they may have more than something. She denied it and kept it as only friends (she was totally truthful about it).
..
..
..
Friendship flourished. They were in fones, internet, meeting. Discussing every little detail about their lives- from their crushes to movies, songs to all wicked stuff they did and eveything. in short, they trusted themselves which only can exist between soulmates (i am serious!!).
..
..
Then, she started to get marriage proposals. I heard the boy was a bit sad. he thought he wud lose his best friend forever So, BOOM, he proposed her. She was shocked. She scolded him that he had been friends with her only to gain romantic favour? Boy pleaded. He said he didnt want to lose her, so he said. But she was very angry and didnt listen to him.
.
.
,
3 months passed. They didnt talk. in between many marriage proposals came. She rejected them finding some fault or the other. Her mom got fed up of all this. Then one HUGE marriage proposal came. Boy was too rich. And her mom told her that this time, this will be the final. Coz the boy was exactly as she had defined in her choice. So, in 1 months time, the date for the marriage was fixed.
.
.
Now, here starts the filmy part.
.
.
.
Boy came to know of this. He immediatley congratulated her. And ask if she still was friends with him. She was still angry with him. She didnt reply. Then after 5 days of continous sms’es by him, she talkd to him that she has forgiven him and decided to remain as friends as always.
.
.
Friendship seemed to return. BUT, the boy AGAIN told her he still loved her and that was impossible for him to believe she will be gone from his life. If she loved him, she had to accept him but if she didnt, she was told to end the friendship. She pleaded to remain as frens, but boy was adamant end it or accept it. So, no choice, she had to end the friendship.
.
.
,
Another twist, boy after 3 days tells her sorry to behave that way. He wants to continue as friends, but he needs time 2 forget his feelings of love for her. When he feels there isnt any feelings, he wud return to her safely as a friend. She tells NO.(i thought good, thats how to deal with a dumb fellow). Boy pleaded that if he continues frenship, he would still keep on loving her and that wud create problems for her married life. She wudnt hear anything from him. (Serves him right, i thought)
.
.
Now here is the part which is beyond my understanding.
7 days before marriage, girl sends him a facebook marriage invitation. Boy is confused. He asks her whats this- u had stoppd being friends and now she sends him this. Also, he said he would not be able to attend her wedding coz he still loves her. he texts her, she doesnt reply. In 3 days time, he was given the actual marriage printed card to him which drove him wild again. Same questions from him, same did she react- no answers, and samely confused was the boy..
.
,
.
2 days b4 marriage, he called her. Finally she recieved. She told she had accepted him as a friend and friendship would AGAIN return as normal. But she said she would not give him the time he wants. She ended the call.
.
.
Thats how she got married to the groom arranged by her family.”
.
.
i have been on my friend’s (her)side always. She never loved him. Always told him to remain as friends. Boy loved her. And wanted her at any cost.
.
.
BUT,
.
.
The events in the last few days before her marriage shook me. This tells me it is also HER who is in love as well. Maybe she didnt realise it till the final days that it was HIM whom she always wanted in her subconscious. And so, she behaved in that manner. she didnt gave him time to forget his feelings. And that too, just before her marriage, is the real sign of real love.
.
.
.
UPDATES—-
After 1 month of her marriage, the boy feels he has moved on (honestly, he is happy for her and is jumping with life). He thinks its time to get back to her old friend.
He texts, ” hey. How are you?”.
But.
Now the girl avoids him. Doesnt reply. Avoids him online in facebook.
.
Now that was not the part of the original plan. It was her who was not willing to give him the time to move on, coz she thought that would make her loose her friend (people here said that) and now he comes all cleanly as a friend and she REJECTs…
.
.
Its easy for guy to move on, he surely will, than to be friend with one such confused soul.
But the question is why avoid him now?
The Story (continued)..a Real Teaser…ur Views..?
Tagged Under : continued..a, Real, story, Teaser...ur, Views
The story has been mentioned in earlier posts. The real day to day events are given at the bottom below. It is complicated coz WOmen seem more complicated and confused (plz dont mind for saying this) and so, i need ur views.
..
..
‘’she is my friend who shares everything with me. She has a best friend (guy) for over 4 years. They had been the thick of friends. Everyone hinted they may have more than something. She denied it and kept it as only friends (she was totally truthful about it).
..
..
..
Friendship flourished. They were in fones, internet, meeting. Discussing every little detail about their lives- from their crushes to movies, songs to all wicked stuff they did and eveything. in short, they trusted themselves which only can exist between soulmates (i am serious!!).
..
..
Then, she started to get marriage proposals. I heard the boy was a bit sad. he thought he wud lose his best friend forever So, BOOM, he proposed her. She was shocked. She scolded him that he had been friends with her only to gain romantic favour? Boy pleaded. He said he didnt want to lose her, so he said. But she was very angry and didnt listen to him.
.
.
,
3 months passed. They didnt talk. in between many marriage proposals came. She rejected them finding some fault or the other. Her mom got fed up of all this. Then one HUGE marriage proposal came. Boy was too rich. And her mom told her that this time, this will be the final. Coz the boy was exactly as she had defined in her choice. So, in 1 months time, the date for the marriage was fixed.
.
.
Now, here starts the filmy part.
.
.
.
Boy came to know of this. He immediatley congratulated her. And ask if she still was friends with him. She was still angry with him. She didnt reply. Then after 5 days of continous sms’es by him, she talkd to him that she has forgiven him and decided to remain as friends as always.
.
.
Friendship seemed to return. BUT, the boy AGAIN told her he still loved her and that was impossible for him to believe she will be gone from his life. If she loved him, she had to accept him but if she didnt, she was told to end the friendship. She pleaded to remain as frens, but boy was adamant end it or accept it. So, no choice, she had to end the friendship.
.
.
,
Another twist, boy after 3 days tells her sorry to behave that way. He wants to continue as friends, but he needs time 2 forget his feelings of love for her. When he feels there isnt any feelings, he wud return to her safely as a friend. She tells NO.(i thought good, thats how to deal with a dumb fellow). Boy pleaded that if he continues frenship, he would still keep on loving her and that wud create problems for her married life. She wudnt hear anything from him. (Serves him right, i thought)
.
.
Now here is the part which is beyond my understanding.
7 days before marriage, girl sends him a facebook marriage invitation. Boy is confused. He asks her whats this- u had stoppd being friends and now she sends him this. Also, he said he would not be able to attend her wedding coz he still loves her. he texts her, she doesnt reply. In 3 days time, he was given the actual marriage printed card to him which drove him wild again. Same questions from him, same did she react- no answers, and samely confused was the boy..
.
,
.
2 days b4 marriage, he called her. Finally she recieved. She told she had accepted him as a friend and friendship would AGAIN return as normal. But she said she would not give him the time he wants. She ended the call.
.
.
Thats how she got married to the groom arranged by her family.”
.
.
i have been on my friend’s (her)side always. She never loved him. Always told him to remain as friends. Boy loved her. And wanted her at any cost.
.
.
BUT,
.
.
The events in the last few days before her marriage shook me. This tells me it is also HER who is in love as well. Maybe she didnt realise it till the final days that it was HIM whom she always wanted in her subconscious. And so, she behaved in that manner. she didnt gave him time to forget his feelings. And that too, just before her marriage, is the real sign of real love.
.
.
.
UPDATES—-
After 1 month of her marriage, the boy feels he has moved on (honestly, he is happy for her and is jumping with life). He thinks its time to get back to her old friend.
He texts, ” hey. How are you?”.
But.
Now the girl avoids him. Doesnt reply. Avoids him online in facebook.
.
Now that was not the part of the original plan. It was her who was not willing to give him the time to move on, coz she thought that would make her loose her friend (people here said that) and now he comes all cleanly as a friend and she REJECTs…
.
.
Its easy for guy to move on, he surely will, than to be friend with one such confused soul.
But the question is why avoid him now?
The Story (continued)……………….…
Tagged Under : continued...................…, story
The story has been mentioned in earlier posts. The real day to day events are given at the bottom below. It is complicated and now i need ur views.
..
..
‘’she is my friend who shares everything with me. She has a best friend (guy) for over 4 years. They had been the thick of friends. Everyone hinted they may have more than something. She denied it and kept it as only friends (she was totally truthful about it).
..
..
..
Friendship flourished. They were in fones, internet, meeting. Discussing every little detail about their lives- from their crushes to movies, songs to all wicked stuff they did and eveything. in short, they trusted themselves which only can exist between soulmates (i am serious!!).
..
..
Then, she started to get marriage proposals. I heard the boy was a bit sad. he thought he wud lose his best friend forever So, BOOM, he proposed her. She was shocked. She scolded him that he had been friends with her only to gain romantic favour? Boy pleaded. He said he didnt want to lose her, so he said. But she was very angry and didnt listen to him.
.
.
,
3 months passed. They didnt talk. in between many marriage proposals came. She rejected them finding some fault or the other. Her mom got fed up of all this. Then one HUGE marriage proposal came. Boy was too rich. And her mom told her that this time, this will be the final. Coz the boy was exactly as she had defined in her choice. So, in 1 months time, the date for the marriage was fixed.
.
.
Now, here starts the filmy part.
.
.
.
Boy came to know of this. He immediatley congratulated her. And ask if she still was friends with him. She was still angry with him. She didnt reply. Then after 5 days of continous sms’es by him, she talkd to him that she has forgiven him and decided to remain as friends as always.
.
.
Friendship seemed to return. BUT, the boy AGAIN told her he still loved her and that was impossible for him to believe she will be gone from his life. If she loved him, she had to accept him but if she didnt, she was told to end the friendship. She pleaded to remain as frens, but boy was adamant end it or accept it. So, no choice, she had to end the friendship.
.
.
,
Another twist, boy after 3 days tells her sorry to behave that way. He wants to continue as friends, but he needs time 2 forget his feelings of love for her. When he feels there isnt any feelings, he wud return to her safely as a friend. She tells NO.(i thought good, thats how to deal with a dumb fellow). Boy pleaded that if he continues frenship, he would still keep on loving her and that wud create problems for her married life. She wudnt hear anything from him. (Serves him right, i thought)
.
.
Now here is the part which is beyond my understanding.
7 days before marriage, girl sends him a facebook marriage invitation. Boy is confused. He asks her whats this- u had stoppd being friends and now she sends him this. Also, he said he would not be able to attend her wedding coz he still loves her. he texts her, she doesnt reply. In 3 days time, he was given the actual marriage printed card to him which drove him wild again. Same questions from him, same did she react- no answers, and samely confused was the boy..
.
,
.
2 days b4 marriage, he called her. Finally she recieved. She told she had accepted him as a friend and friendship would AGAIN return as normal. But she said she would not give him the time he wants. She ended the call.
.
.
Thats how she got married to the groom arranged by her family.”
.
.
i have been on my friend’s (her)side always. She never loved him. Always told him to remain as friends. Boy loved her. And wanted her at any cost.
.
.
BUT,
.
.
The events in the last few days before her marriage shook me. This tells me it is also HER who is in love as well. Maybe she didnt realise it till the final days that it was HIM whom she always wanted in her subconscious. And so, she behaved in that manner. she didnt gave him time to forget his feelings. And that too, just before her marriage, is the real sign of real love.
.
.
.
UPDATES—-
After 1 month of her marriage, the boy feels he has moved on (honestly, he is happy for her and is jumping with life). He thinks its time to get back to her old friend.
He texts, ” hey. How are you?”.
But.
Now the girl avoids him. Doesnt reply. Avoids him online in facebook.
Now that was not the part of the story. It was her who was not willing to give him the time, and now she doesnt respond to him.
Its easy for guy to move on, he surely will than to be friend with one such confused soul. But the question is why avoid him now?
A Real Story…………?
Tagged Under : Real, story
Story too filmy????
Yeah that u would say after reading my friend’s story. I would like to share it with u.
..
Read on
..
..
‘’she is my friend who shares everything with me. She has a best friend (guy) for over 4 years. They had been the thick of friends. Everyone hinted they may have more than something. She denied it and kept it as only friends (she was totally truthful about it).
..
..
..
Friendship flourished. They were in fones, internet, meeting. Discussing every little detail about their lives- from their crushes to movies, songs to all wicked stuff they did and eveything. in short, they trusted themselves which only can exist between soulmates (i am serious!!).
..
..
Then, she started to get marriage proposals. I heard the boy was a bit sad. he thought he wud lose his best friend forever So, BOOM, he proposed her. She was shocked. She scolded him that he had been friends with her only to gain romantic favour? Boy pleaded. He said he didnt want to lose her, so he said. But she was very angry and didnt listen to him.
.
.
,
3 months passed. They didnt talk. in between many marriage proposals came. She rejected them finding some fault or the other. Her mom got fed up of all this. Then one HUGE marriage proposal came. Boy was too rich. And her mom told her that this time, this will be the final. Coz the boy was exactly as she had defined in her choice. So, in 1 months time, the date for the marriage was fixed.
.
.
Now, here starts the filmy part.
.
.
.
Boy came to know of this. He immediatley congratulated her. And ask if she still was friends with him. She was still angry with him. She didnt reply. Then after 5 days of continous sms’es by him, she talkd to him that she has forgiven him and decided to remain as friends as always.
.
.
Friendship seemed to return. BUT, the boy AGAIN told her he still loved her and that was impossible for him to believe she will be gone from his life. If she loved him, she had to accept him but if she didnt, she was told to end the friendship. She pleaded to remain as frens, but boy was adamant end it or accept it. So, no choice, she had to end the friendship.
.
.
,
Another twist, boy after 3 days tells her sorry to behave that way. He wants to continue as friends, but he needs time 2 forget his feelings of love for her. When he feels there isnt any feelings, he wud return to her safely as a friend. She tells NO.(i thought good, thats how to deal with a dumb fellow). Boy pleaded that if he continues frenship, he would still keep on loving her and that wud create problems for her married life. She wudnt hear anything from him. (Serves him right, i thought)
.
.
Now here is the part which is beyond my understanding.
7 days before marriage, girl sends him a facebook marriage invitation. Boy is confused. He asks her whats this- u had stoppd being friends and now she sends him this. Also, he said he would not be able to attend her wedding coz he still loves her. he texts her, she doesnt reply. In 3 days time, he was given the actual marriage printed card to him which drove him wild again. Same questions from him, same did she react- no answers, and samely confused was the boy..
.
,
.
2 days b4 marriage, he called her. Finally she recieved. She told she had accepted him as a friend and friendship would AGAIN return as normal. But she said she would not give him the time he wants. She ended the call.
.
.
Thats how she got married to the groom arranged by her family.”
.
.
i have been on my friend’s (her)side always. She never loved him. Always told him to remain as friends. Boy loved her. And wanted her at any cost.
.
.
BUT,
.
.
The events in the last few days before her marriage shook me. This tells me it is also HER who is in love as well. Maybe she didnt realise it till the final days that it was HIM whom she always wanted in her subconscious. And so, she behaved in that manner. she didnt gave him time to forget his feelings. And that too, just before her marriage, is the real sign of real love.
.
.
.
What do u say people about both the boy and the girl?
A Real Story….. Plz Comment..?
Tagged Under : Comment, Real, story
Story too filmy????
Yeah that u would say after reading my friend’s story. I would like to share it with u.
..
Read on
..
..
‘’she is my friend who shares everything with me. She has a best friend (guy) for over 4 years. They had been the thick of friends. Everyone hinted they may have more than something. She denied it and kept it as only friends (she was totally truthful about it).
..
..
..
Friendship flourished. They were in fones, internet, meeting. Discussing every little detail about their lives- from their crushes to movies, songs to all wicked stuff they did and eveything. in short, they trusted themselves which only can exist between soulmates (i am serious!!).
..
..
Then, she started to get marriage proposals. I heard the boy was a bit sad. he thought he wud lose his best friend forever So, BOOM, he proposed her. She was shocked. She scolded him that he had been friends with her only to gain romantic favour? Boy pleaded. He said he didnt want to lose her, so he said. But she was very angry and didnt listen to him.
.
.
,
3 months passed. They didnt talk. in between many marriage proposals came. She rejected them finding some fault or the other. Her mom got fed up of all this. Then one HUGE marriage proposal came. Boy was too rich. And her mom told her that this time, this will be the final. Coz the boy was exactly as she had defined in her choice. So, in 1 months time, the date for the marriage was fixed.
.
.
Now, here starts the filmy part.
.
.
.
Boy came to know of this. He immediatley congratulated her. And ask if she still was friends with him. She was still angry with him. She didnt reply. Then after 5 days of continous sms’es by him, she talkd to him that she has forgiven him and decided to remain as friends as always.
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Friendship seemed to return. BUT, the boy AGAIN told her he still loved her and that was impossible for him to believe she will be gone from his life. If she loved him, she had to accept him but if she didnt, she was told to end the friendship. She pleaded to remain as frens, but boy was adamant end it or accept it. So, no choice, she had to end the friendship.
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Another twist, boy after 3 days tells her sorry to behave that way. He wants to continue as friends, but he needs time 2 forget his feelings of love for her. When he feels there isnt any feelings, he wud return to her safely as a friend. She tells NO.(i thought good, thats how to deal with a dumb fellow). Boy pleaded that if he continues frenship, he would still keep on loving her and that wud create problems for her married life. She wudnt hear anything from him. (Serves him right, i thought)
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Now here is the part which is beyond my understanding.
7 days before marriage, girl sends him a facebook marriage invitation. Boy is confused. He asks her whats this- u had stoppd being friends and now she sends him this. Also, he said he would not be able to attend her wedding coz he still loves her. he texts her, she doesnt reply. In 3 days time, he was given the actual marriage printed card to him which drove him wild again. Same questions from him, same did she react- no answers, and samely confused was the boy..
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2 days b4 marriage, he called her. Finally she recieved. She told she had accepted him as a friend and friendship would AGAIN return as normal. But she said she would not give him the time he wants. She ended the call.
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Thats how she got married to the groom arranged by her family.”
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i have been on my friend’s (her)side always. She never loved him. Always told him to remain as friends. Boy loved her. And wanted her at any cost.
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The events in the last few days before her marriage shook me. This tells me it is also HER who is in love as well. Maybe she didnt realise it till the final days that it was HIM whom she always wanted in her subconscious. And so, she behaved in that manner. she didnt gave him time to forget his feelings. And that too, just before her marriage, is the real sign of real love.
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What do u say people regarding the emotional state of both her and the boy?
need some opinions on which one us better, and what would be some good parts to add, or if it was a movie what scene would you add. I need an idea on first kiss and stuff, just tell the truth.
I am going to write another story. Usually my books are romantic, funny, but serious. I always imagine a middle aged woman as my main character. Usually Diane Lane, Cher, ect.
I need to know what my audiance would be more interested in reading. Here are my 2 options.
1 – Tess is a woman who works at minimun wage, and she always wanted to be a singer. So she signs up for a contest where there are 100 people competing, and each week they eliminate 10, abd the final 30 get to work at a dance club, while the winner goes on tour. Tess enters, and one of the mean judges (Sean) takes a hate into her, until she drives him home one night. Later on about 5 weeks into the compitition, they go to Sean’s sister’s wedding and have their first kiss dancing. And finally she wins 1st place and has an option to go on tour, but chooses to stay home with Sean forever.
2 – Sheryl lives in Iowa, but desides to take a vacation in LA for 1 month. She stays at a big hotel and is all alone, devorced twice and widdowed once. She gets a post card with a picture of the hotel on it, and writes “To the love of my life. Please come get me. I’ll be here until January 1st ” Then she writes her room number and tosses it out the window. The post card gets around by wind, ect, and soon a man named Steve finds it and wants to rescue Sheryl. But Sheryl gets scared so she changes rooms with another woman right before Steve gets there, and Steve falls for the other woman but on new years eve he breaks up with her because he finds out she’s bot Sheryl. On Chirstmas Eve, Sheryl is alone in a bar and her drink is pricy, so Steve whom come in, offers to pay for it, and he just knows that it’s Sheryl <3

