Wedding Planning Tips

need some opinions on which one us better, and what would be some good parts to add, or if it was a movie what scene would you add. I need an idea on first kiss and stuff, just tell the truth.
I am going to write another story. Usually my books are romantic, funny, but serious. I always imagine a middle aged woman as my main character. Usually Diane Lane, Cher, ect.
I need to know what my audiance would be more interested in reading. Here are my 2 options.
1 – Tess is a woman who works at minimun wage, and she always wanted to be a singer. So she signs up for a contest where there are 100 people competing, and each week they eliminate 10, abd the final 30 get to work at a dance club, while the winner goes on tour. Tess enters, and one of the mean judges (Sean) takes a hate into her, until she drives him home one night. Later on about 5 weeks into the compitition, they go to Sean’s sister’s wedding and have their first kiss dancing. And finally she wins 1st place and has an option to go on tour, but chooses to stay home with Sean forever.
2 – Sheryl lives in Iowa, but desides to take a vacation in LA for 1 month. She stays at a big hotel and is all alone, devorced twice and widdowed once. She gets a post card with a picture of the hotel on it, and writes “To the love of my life. Please come get me. I’ll be here until January 1st ” Then she writes her room number and tosses it out the window. The post card gets around by wind, ect, and soon a man named Steve finds it and wants to rescue Sheryl. But Sheryl gets scared so she changes rooms with another woman right before Steve gets there, and Steve falls for the other woman but on new years eve he breaks up with her because he finds out she’s bot Sheryl. On Chirstmas Eve, Sheryl is alone in a bar and her drink is pricy, so Steve whom come in, offers to pay for it, and he just knows that it’s Sheryl <3

I need some opinions on which one us better, and what would be some good parts to add, or if it was a movie what scene would you add. I need an idea on first kiss and stuff, just tell the truth.
I am going to write another story. Usually my books are romantic, funny, but serious. I always imagine a middle aged woman as my main character. Usually Diane Lane, Cher, ect.
I need to know what my audiance would be more interested in reading. Here are my 2 options.
1 – Tess is a woman who works at minimun wage, and she always wanted to be a singer. So she signs up for a contest where there are 100 people competing, and each week they eliminate 10, abd the final 30 get to work at a dance club, while the winner goes on tour. Tess enters, and one of the mean judges (Sean) takes a hate into her, until she drives him home one night. Later on about 5 weeks into the compitition, they go to Sean’s sister’s wedding and have their first kiss dancing. And finally she wins 1st place and has an option to go on tour, but chooses to stay home with Sean forever.
2 – Sheryl lives in Iowa, but desides to take a vacation in LA for 1 month. She stays at a big hotel and is all alone, devorced twice and widdowed once. She gets a post card with a picture of the hotel on it, and writes “To the love of my life. Please come get me. I’ll be here until January 1st ” Then she writes her room number and tosses it out the window. The post card gets around by wind, ect, and soon a man named Steve finds it and wants to rescue Sheryl. But Sheryl gets scared so she changes rooms with another woman right before Steve gets there, and Steve falls for the other woman but on new years eve he breaks up with her because he finds out she’s bot Sheryl. On new years eve both steve and Sheryl go out to see the ball drop and Steve sees her and he just knows that it’s Sheryl.

I need some opinions on which one us better, and what would be some good parts to add, or if it was a movie what scene would you add. I need an idea on first kiss and stuff, just tell the truth.
I am going to write another story. Usually my books are romantic, funny, but serious. I always imagine a middle aged woman as my main character. Usually Diane Lane, Cher, ect.
I need to know what my audiance would be more interested in reading. Here are my 2 options.
1 – Tess is a woman who works at minimun wage, and she always wanted to be a singer. So she signs up for a contest where there are 100 people competing, and each week they eliminate 10, abd the final 30 get to work at a dance club, while the winner goes on tour. Tess enters, and one of the mean judges (Sean) takes a hate into her, until she drives him home one night. Later on about 5 weeks into the compitition, they go to Sean’s sister’s wedding and have their first kiss dancing. And finally she wins 1st place and has an option to go on tour, but chooses to stay home with Sean forever.
2 – Sheryl lives in Iowa, but desides to take a vacation in LA for 1 month. She stays at a big hotel and is all alone, devorced twice and widdowed once. She gets a post card with a picture of the hotel on it, and writes “To the love of my life. Please come get me. I’ll be here until July 7th”. Then she writes her room number and tosses it out the window. The post card gets around by wind, ect, and soon a man named Steve finds it and wants to rescue Sheryl.

I really want to be a song writer but I don’t know how to write my favorite genre
I listen to black veil brides and bullet for my valentine and alot more but I don’t know how to write good songs like them….can u help me?

his birthday is coming up, hes older than me and he’ll be 18.. i just wanted something funny/sarcastic to say, maybe like, kim k’s wedding is today, you must be so honored:) haha idk, any ideas?

his birthday is coming up, hes older than me and he’ll be 18.. i just wanted something funny/sarcastic to say, maybe like, kim k’s wedding is today, you must be so honored:) haha idk, any ideas?

Or will they insist on me continuing to take their generic pills? (I’m going on Weds but I wanted a heads up if you don’t think they will.) Thanks!!!!

The rain was pouring heavily from the dim sky.
“Perfect, just perfect I’m out of gas!” Lauren said aloud hitting the stirring wheel with her fist.
With all the overtime she had been working slipped her mind to get gas as soon as she got off. She told herself in the morning while running late that she’d take the risk and now she regretted. Searching her purse for her cell phone she realized that she left it in the desk at her office. Running her fingers through her hair she reached in her purse for cigarettes. The cigarettes that she planned unsuccessfully to stop smoking long ago. She waited impatiently for someone to past by in hopes of helping her.
Her eyes lit up when she saw a car’s headlights in her rear view mirror. She prepared to get out the car and flag the person down. The vehicle approached and slowed until it was directly side by side with hers. She rolled her window down and so did he. They paused just staring at each other. There was an instant attraction that could be felt by the both of them. Lauren quickly put her cigarette out.
“Do you need any help?” the guy who appeared to be in his mid twenties asked.
“I ran out of gas and the gas station is several miles up the road, stupid I know” she replied. He smiled revealing a perfect set of pearly whites.
“You’re not stupid it happens to the best of us”
“I’ll go get you some gas and I’ll be right back you can ride along if you like” he stated.
After watching so many movies about highway serial killers she decided against that offer.
“Oh, no I’ll be fine waiting here” she fumbled in her purse removing a fifty dollar bill.
Before she could get out and hand him the money he took off.
“Jerk!” Lauren shouted at his rear lights.
She waited another fifteen minutes impatiently on firing up her half smoken cigarette which sat in the ash tray .When she saw the same guy driving back down the road towards her. She was beginning to feel uncomfortable. Opening the glove department for her pepper spray and her heart beating wildly in her chest she locked the door. He went into the trunk of his car and was holding something in his hands. Un phased and drenched from the rain he went around to her gas tank. Minutes later he was walking up to the driver side window. He was indeed very attractive and Lauren could see his abs through his white t shirt. He motioned his hand for her to roll the window down.
“You’re all set beautiful lady” he said.
“I can not thank you enough, I really appreciate this” Lauren said sincerely. She picked the fifty dollar bill up from off the seat.
“Do I owe you more, is fifty enough because I can go to the ATM?” she asked.
“It’s on me.”
Lauren’s eyes roamed his strong arms which were covered in tattoos . The street guy wasn’t Lauren’s type by far but strangely she it sexy on him. The young man was making her feel some kind of way. She immediately thought about her husband and their struggling marriage. Sure the thrill was gone and he was always away on business but that was something they planned to work on. Her flesh wanted to rip this unknown guy’s clothes off and devour him right there in either car like lustful teenagaers but her mind reminded her of how foolish that would be. She didn’t know this guy yet she wanted to sleep with him.
“Too bad for me, I see that you’re married” he eyed her wedding ring.
“What a lucky man to have such a beautifull wife like you”he said.
Lauren was shocked and flattered. It had been a while since she was called beautiful and an even longer while since she came into contact or held a conversation with any man other than her husband. She need the compliment because being forty she was beginning to feel old.
“Thanks, you’re very handsome yourself” Lauren replied.
The chemistry between the two was evident and Lauren didn’t want to do something she’d regret .
“Thanks again”she said starting her car which now had a full tank of gas

The climax of my novel is an epic battle royale that takes place just after the wedding of the two main characters.
These are the details so far:
The “good guys” are totally unprepared for the attack, no plan or strategy whatsoever
Each character has an animal fighting alongside them, a spirit animal if you will
The “bad guys” have three small armies, composed of zombies, slaves and soldiers
The good guys have one army, one of soldiers
I have the final fight planned out in my head, but i need some action before it leads up to that. Please give me any suggestions, thanks!

This is a song called “The Expected Prodigies”. I’m 14, so I’m not great, but if you can, give an opinion!
Maybe it’s the way they walk on by
Maybe it’s the way they question why
You hide in the roaring tide
An alchemist with no gold to spare
A mother with no love to share
The missing parts to your unkindled hearts
You know you don’t suffer fools gladly
Who love themselves so madly
Not seeking to find what drowns the mind
A polygamist with no one to love
This angel who fell from above
Dead in its place with no golden memories to erase
But were you so wrong?
You knew you were strong
It’s just the bar was held so high
You could not try to defy
What was to be expected…
Another demon rejected
The last flower to bloom
The worst to assume
This arrangement of brides
With their cowardly hides
Can really be… so damned to the sky
You can’t question it… want to try?
I’m calm, I’m calm
You’re wrong, you’re wrong
I’m strong, I’m strong
You’re wrong, you’re dead wrong
Maybe it’s the way you leave us cold
Maybe it’s how you left those tales untold
You thought you could get the last word
But you’re not half of what this world deserved
The last bird to fly its wings
The last wasp with its heavenly stings
A natural seen through life’s eye
How it must feel to be the last lie